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红烧毛毛虫

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  2007年8月18日    星期六   天气:晴转多云
  红烧毛毛虫
  我和小虎在树阴下玩耍时,无意中发现了一只毛毛虫,想起昨天被毛毛虫螫后,浑身起满疙瘩,又痒又痛的那股难受的劲,我就气不打一处来。
  毛毛虫绿绿的身体上,长满了长长的白毛,背上一小片黑毛特别显眼。
  我正要把它踩成“肉泥”的时候,小虎紧张地说:“别踩,它让我们受罪,我们又干吗不修理修理它呢。”说干就干,我们用小棍把毛毛虫按住,找来书夹子拔它的毛。毛毛虫痛得左右翻滚,不断地扭动身子。“按住了,再拔!”这一次,毛毛虫只是动了一下身子,便冒出许多“血”来。“叫你害人,拔了你的毒毛。”小虎子又连拔了几次,这时的毛毛虫一动不动了,成了名副其实的“光杆司令”。
  “它完蛋了,扔了吧。”“不,往它身上浇水,装死,没那么便宜。”
  小虎子回家拿来半个易拉罐,倒了点水,又放了油、盐、酱、醋和龙虾粉。“红烧毛毛虫!”“是,红烧了它。”
  闻着香香的味,看着直挺挺的毛毛虫,我们唱啊,跳啊……
  点评:小作者细腻地描写了修理毛毛虫的经过,语句通顺,层次清楚,充满了童真童趣。对小毛毛虫看似“狠”了点,也确是罪有应得。
  指导老师 陶德智
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Diary of a
On August 18, 2007, the weather on Saturday: clear to overcast
Braise in soy sauce of caterpillar
Tiger and I play in the shade, inadvertently found a caterpillar, remind of yesterday is the caterpillar sting, the whole body full of bumps, and itching and pain that sad, I spirit not dozen 1 come.
Caterpillar green body, covered with long white hair, on a small piece of black hair particularly conspicuous.
I was about to step on it to "glue", tiger nervously said: "don't tread, it let us suffer mental agony, why don't we repair it?" To start, we use a small stick to hold the caterpillar, find a locus of clamps to pull its hair. Pain around the caterpillar, squirmed with constantly. "Hold, then dial!" This time, the caterpillar just move the body, and many of the "blood" to. "Call you harm, pulled out your poison." Small nothing even pull out a few times again, at this moment the caterpillar motionless, became a veritable "command".
"It's finished, throw." "No, water on it, feign death, not so cheap."
Little getting home for half of the cans, poured some water, and put the oil powder, salt, sauce, vinegar and lobsters. "Braise in soy sauce caterpillar!" "Yes, braise in soy sauce.
Smelling the sweet sweet taste, everyone looked at caterpillar, we sing, dance...
Comment on: small the author describes the repair of the caterpillar, sentence fluent, clear hierarchy, full of tong zhen tong qu. To the little caterpillar looks a little "malicious", and certainly deserve it.
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