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善行,我该如何安放你--高考优秀作文

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善行,我该如何安放你--高考优秀作文
  慈善,本该是一个充满人性关怀的字眼,是一个能让行善者体知自身对于社会超出个体有限价值的义举,亦当成为受助者生命的冬天里的一把温暖的手炉,但如今,它遭遇的敏感和尴尬人尽皆知,就如那个感激却婉拒的家庭。
  使慈善处于如此进退维谷的境遇的,在我看来,可能是行善者披着慈善外衣的功利和作秀之心,但更多的情况下,我无奈地认识到,行善者的一颗赤诚之心无可置疑,而他们行善举的方式往往成了让爱传递的最大阻碍。正因为他们总是惯于以“救世主”的目光来表达对弱势群体的善意,受助者在这目光的省视下被点燃的一颗过于澎湃的自尊心让善意之举充满了火药味,从而,受助者拒绝牺牲在弱势地位下愈显珍贵的尊严和平等来满足慈善家的自身价值认同。就如那最后以施舍之名拒绝捐助的家庭,我相信,生活尚且难以为继的他们需要这份帮助,也许是以往受助的不堪经历或这位富翁的施助方式让他们艰难的选择拒绝。
  然而,慈善之路不应因行善方式不当而闭塞阻滞。既已找到症结,何不求良医以自治?
  真正的慈善家往往坚决丢下慈善这件标签,而以人类共同体的身份去行善,如同约翰多恩那句:“人不是一个孤岛,所有人的不幸皆是我的不幸”。唯有如此,行善者才能真正懂得他想帮助的对象,才能以最适当的方式给他们以乐于接受而有意义的帮助与扶持,让受助人觉得,他们是以平等的地位扶持着前进,而不是如难民领取政府施舍的粥粮。
  晏阳初,世界平民教育之父,他是在发现了“苦力”的价值的基础上向他们伸出援助之手。在平民教育运动中,与其称他为教育界的慈善家,不如尊其为所有农民、苦力的老师、朋友。他曾说:“欲化农民,必先农民化。”他不愿安居太师矣,空谈误国计,而是扎根到农民中,探索真正对他们有用的善举——开化与教育。
  人类作为一个共同体,要成为坚固的岛屿,需要慈善的力量来修补脆弱的堤坝,而要让慈善有力前进,就必须行善者脱下救世主的眼镜,带上捐助对象的眼镜,扎根到他的世界中,问一句:“你需要什么,我们能共同努力改善些什么?”这才是有持久力量的真正慈善,需要我们以对的方式共同前进。
  点评
  本文紧扣富翁热心慈善事业,捐助三个家庭的材料,引出有关慈善的话题,并以此为中心内容展开论述,符合本次作文的材料内容和含意范围。
  文章开篇简单点出慈善的意义后,顺势提出慈善遭遇婉拒的尴尬问题,进而分析产生这一问题的根本原因在于行善方式不当,紧接下文论述如何改变方式,以人类共同体的平等身份行善,并举晏阳初的事例以佐证。最后,以共同努力改善慈善的方式为愿望收束全文,回答了文章标题提出的问题。
 文章观点明确,真正有效的善行需要采用适合捐助对象的行善方式,在捐助者和受助者之间搭建起平等互信的桥梁,让善意顺利进行,让爱心顺利传播。对当前慈善存在的社会问题分析较深入,认识较深刻,能够透过现象深入本质,揭示事物内在的因果关系,思路清晰,论述较有层次。
英文:
Charity, what was supposed to be a full of human caring words, is a can make way is necessary for the body to know itself beyond the limited value of the individual to society, as well as become the recipients of life with a warm hand warmer in the winter, but now, it's sensitive and embarrassment are well known, as the family grateful but declined.
Make charity in such awkward situation, in my opinion, is likely to be beholden to the heart of the utilitarian and wearing charity show, but in more cases, I reluctantly realized that mankind are beholden to there is no doubt a sincere heart, and the way they doing good tend to become the biggest obstacle of let love pass. Because they are always used by the vision of "savior" to express the goodwill of the vulnerable group, and scrutinized by the recipients in the eyes lit a too surging pride that goodwill powder filled in, thus, recipients refused to pay under the weak position of an increasingly precious dignity and equality to satisfy own value identity philanthropists. Like the last refused by the name of charity donations in the family, I believe that life still unsustainable they need the help, may be the recipient of past or way of helping the rich man refused to let them difficult choice.
However, the improper road should not be doing charity and block block. Why don't I have find the problem, for the good autonomy?
True philanthropists are often resolutely leave charity this label, and as a community of human to do good, as John donne that: "man is not an island, that unfortunately all my misfortune. Only in this way, can people really know he wants to help the object, to give them in the most appropriate way to happy to accept and meaningful to help and support, let the recipients feel that they are equal status to support forward, rather than cereal food as refugees to get government handouts.
James yen, the father of the civilian education in the world, he is found in "coolies" on the basis of the value of a helping hand to them. In the civilian education movement, he is not education, philanthropists is inferior to honour its for all farmers, coolies teacher and friend. He said: "for farmers, farmers must first." He didn't want to how to reside a surname yi, talk is harmful, but the root to the farmers, to explore the real useful to their ACTS of kindness, civilized and education.
Human as a community, to be a strong islands, need the strength of the charity to repair the fragile DAMS, and to make charity strong forward, we must do good to remove the savior of the glasses, glasses take donations object, rooted in his world, asking: "what do you need, we can work together to improve something?" This is a lasting power of true charity, we need to advance together in right way.
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In this paper, stick to the rich, charities donated three families of materials, raises about charity, and content for the center, in accordance with the composition of the material content and scope of meaning.
Article begins with simple points out the significance of the charity, then puts forward the charity declined awkward questions, then analysis the root cause of this problem is to do good way improper, immediately below on how to change the way, to do good in the equality of human community, and James yen examples as evidence. Finally, for the desire to help in the form of a concerted effort to improve the charity full text, answer questions from the post title.
Article view clear, really effective good need to adopt suitable donor object way of doing good, set up based on equality and mutual trust between donors and recipients Bridges, let kindness smoothly, let the love spread smoothly. Analysis of the current social problems of the charity deeper, understanding more deep, deep essence through the phenomena, revealing the intrinsic causal relationship between things, clarity, more levels.
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